Tuesday, 26 August 2014

Invisible Moon - Haiku

Carpe Diem's new challenge ("Vision Quest" #1 day 1 "New Moon"). For the first Vision Quest the haiku is


new moon
she, our moon will grow again
a new life cycle
© Chevrefeuille



And here's what I wrote inspired by it -

invisible moon

I perceived in hiding
craving to be seen

26 comments:

  1. Beautiful words. A bit of hide and seek :)

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    1. Thanks a lot... the hide and seek is the constant struggle and fun too, isn't it?

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    1. Thanks, as always, Kristjaan. Pleasure that you liked the words I wrote :)

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  3. Wonderful Nimi... really the moon hides in the hope of being visible again.. :-)

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    1. True... but does the moon have a choice in whether it hides or not...

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    1. Thanks for visiting... but I still prefer my moon wanting to be visible :)

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  5. Most of us crave to be seen. We want others to notice us--and sometimes we are bitterly disappointed when they don't.

    Seeking Sister Moon

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    1. Bull's eye... I couldn't have explained it better...
      Thanks

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    1. Thanks. I am glad you liked the words I wrote...

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  7. will grow again....absolutely true

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    1. The circle of life... and of universe.
      Thanks...

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    1. Thanks Kokila.
      Hope and beauty - two emotions that keep us all sane, right?

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  9. So hopeful & inspirational! Positive words :)

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    1. Thanks Anita.
      It's inspiring to look for positivity in God's creation...

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  10. The idea of the moon craving to be seen -- just lovely :)

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  11. Loved your take on the prompt :-)

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    1. Thanks Amrit. I am glad you liked my attempt...

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  12. The various facets of moon portrayed amazingly!!

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    1. Thanks again, Vandana... It's a pleasure that you enjoy reading my words...

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