Friday, 8 August 2014

Persimmons - Haiku

Persimmon tree (Credits)


lonely on branches
eager to move on
Persimmons ripen





I had never heard of Persimmons before. On reading Bastet and Sekhmet's blog, I was fascinated. 

The photograph of leafless branches with fruits hanging off them - it seems like an imaginary drawing. So I was tempted to imagine about all that I now knew of Persimmons and write about it. The result is the Haiku above.


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14 comments:

  1. packed and perfect...very well crafted Nimi

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    1. Thank you Anupam. I admire your writing, so it's good to know that you like this.

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  2. This reminds me of the minds of young children. Ripe with school lessons wanting to grow up too fast.

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    1. That is one of the things I thought of :)
      Thanks for visiting, Jules

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    1. Thanks a lot, Maniparna. I love your haikus, by the way...

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    1. Thanks Kristjaan. Special thanks for stopping by :)

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