"Now you know the rules, forget them immediately" - Basho
Clouds are indeed life! Well-said, Nimi.
Thanks Gabriella... Glad that you like it :)
I like this. There definitely is a strong connection between clouds and the emotions of life! Nice to see you at Poetry Jam.
Thanks, Mary.Yes, the clouds can so easily be metaphors for what we feel, I think...I do try to be regular in writing and being part of Poetry Jam... What can I say, 'Work in Progress' :)
This is really nice and has such a contemplative feel, life is full of moments of beauty.
Thanks Alan... Exactly what I was trying to convey :)
Very true Nimi....ever changing indeed. A lovely write. :-)
Thanks Carrie... for reading and for commenting too :)
"Spreading the smiles / with their tears"...telling the truths of life ...so beautifully captivated...
Thanks Sumana...It is often true in life that one has suffer to let others be happy :(
Yes, very much like life!
' Clouds... and life' that tells you all, nice compositionBeyond Clouds
Thanks Cifar :)
Very true. Agree! Nice one, Nimi.
Thanks Anita. Glad that you like it and agree with it :)
very nice :)
Thanks Madhusudan :)
Wonderfully written Nimi...love the last few lines "Temporary, ever-changingColors and shapesjust a mask -Clouds... and life"...so well captured...the essence of life !
Thanks Maniparna... Your appreciation means a lot :)
Beautifully written.."Drifting Together...Yet strangers" took my heart away!!
Thanks dear... Don't we all write to touch hearts! Thanks again :)
Yes ever-changing certainly applies to life as well as clouds!
Thanks Peggy. Thanks for reading and commenting...
I liked your metaphor of clouds being life, ever-changing and different.