Sunday, 9 November 2014

Boneset whispers... Haiku

Credits: Boneset (or Fujibakama)

huddled 
they whisper secrets
-autumn gaiety



Prompt by and Shared with -
Carpe Diem #600, Boneset or Fujibakama (Eupatorium Japonicum)
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2014/11/carpe-diem-600-boneset-or-fujibakama.html







6 comments:

  1. Excellent response Nimi ... I had at first read some difficulties with adapting to it, but after translating it to my own language (Dutch) "I saw the light" :-)

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    1. :)
      When I saw the picture of the group of flowers together, it looked like they were sharing secrets in small groups... and hence the haiku.
      I am glad you like it!

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  2. Charm of both your words and autumn. Lovely!

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  3. 'Precise !
    Such a word for a poem is uncommon but I too felt precisely the same hence ...
    and yes your words have captured the gaiety very nicely ... a bunch of shy giggling girls it is :)

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    1. And you got the thoughts behind the three lines I wrote perfectly...
      Thank You :)

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