Wednesday, 13 January 2016

First Glow - haiku

first glow
on my beloved's face
-floret blossoms

©Nimi Arora


28 comments:

  1. lovely interpretation - especially creating the "sense of dawn" without using the actual word

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    1. Thanks Judith...
      I started writing about the first ray of sun, and ended up writing this... and I have to confess, I myself loved it :)

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    1. Thank you for the emotional response :)

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    1. Thanks... Dawn and Dusk do stir up strong emotions :)

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    1. Thank you... Mission accomplished :)

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    1. Thanks... I am glad you liked it :)

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    1. Thanks Payal... Glad that you like it...

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  7. Beautiful interpretation! loved it :)

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    1. Thanks Kokila. Glad you like it. Means a lot :)

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    1. Thanks. I love the hope in your name :)
      Welcome to my blog

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