Tuesday, 4 November 2014

Sun's Kingdom... a poem

Fantasy-world in the sky (Image Source)
spreading halo
in the golden kingdom
sun stretches

sun stretches
lighting its own kingdom
chariot of fire

chariot of fire
clouds feeling cherished
sun smiles

Prompt by and Shared with -
Carpe Diem "Time Glass" # 9, Clouds
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2014/11/carpe-diem-time-glass-9-clouds.html








18 comments:

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    1. The prompt was about imagining a fantasy world... and I did :)

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  2. I like the idea of there being a golden kingdom. May we all be so blessed as to behold it!

    Swiftly Passing Clouds

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  3. Nice set of haiku. Love the overall feeling of a golden sunlit kingdom

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    1. Thanks Dolores. The prompt of the 'Clouds', a fantasy world and the surreal image accompanying it...
      I just thought that Sun had to be the king, lighting up his kingdom...

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  4. ah.. you took us to those dreams .. blessed is the sun.

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    1. The beauty of dreams... where we can imagine everything to be perfect and good...

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  5. Beautiful and rich, golden and sunny.. loved it :)

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    1. Thanks Kokila...
      What I felt, when I saw the picture that came with the prompt, can be describe with the very same words. And since you felt the same when you read my words, I feel like...
      Mission Accomplished :)

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    2. yeah.. it is rich ... regal and royal.. truly a kingdom ! you have wrote aptly and superbly :)

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