Monday, 16 February 2015

Shadow in Moonlight

The challenge in Carpe Diem Special #132 is to write a Haiku sense, tone and spirit as

Under a cold
street lamp
I’ve just turned
the corner


© Fuyuko Tomita


Credits: Japanese Street Lantern (photo © Jim Epler)


And here's my attempt. 


my shadow 
shivers on way home
moonlit path




Does it work? I am not very sure... But this is the best I could write...


Prompt by and Shared with-
Carpe Diem Special #132, Fuyuko Tomita's "the corner"
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/02/carpe-diem-special-132-fuyuko-tomitas.html










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