Monday, 16 February 2015

Silence...

being alone
a crowd of strangers
surreal silence

striking silence
thoughts start pouring in
solitary racket




Prompt by and Shared with -
Poetry Jam - 'Silence'

Shared with -
WriteTribe ProBlogger Challenge


29 comments:

  1. I do think sometimes a person can be VERY alone among strangers...and perhaps this is the most difficult kind of silence of all.

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    1. So true, Mary... it's always good to have you visit my blog...

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  2. How true very nicely written.

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    1. Thanks a lot. I am glad you like my poem :)

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  3. it is amazing that there can be so much silence
    in a crowd of people...and loneliness as well.

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  4. loneliness is a silent killer...well done Nimi...

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    1. Thanks a lot Sumana... Loneliness can certainly kill...
      Cheers to friends... bloggers and others :)

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  5. quoting you, guess Introspection is the key. Awesomely put!!

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    1. Thanks a lot... Good to see you here again :)

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  6. Striking silence i like that really hits home, that emotion of emptiness. Nicely done.

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    1. Thanks... it feels good to hit home, even though the emotions are sad :)

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  7. Loneliness in a crowd and thoughts making a racket in one's mind are certainly very disturbing occurrences.

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    1. Very true, Gabriella... Thanks for reading and for commenting :)

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  8. There can be a silence within, even with a crowd outside. Nicely written.

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  9. Yes, rightly said silence questions our minds :)

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    1. Silence is essential... and silence can be painful...
      Perspective matters!
      Good to see you here again...

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  10. Beautiful....I am here after dome time and so glad to be here ...:)

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    1. Always good to have you here Kokila... Thanks!

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  11. It is pretty surreal when you are with a crowd you don't know and have not struck up a conversation with anyone...and all seem intent on their own conversations.

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    1. You got my thoughts perfectly, Donna... Thanks!

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  12. We carry our own silence within us even if surrounded by a noisy crowd. Lovely, Nimi!

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    1. Thanks Nicholas... I am glad you like it!

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  13. Nothing lonelier than a crowd of strangers …

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    1. So true, Margaret... Loneliness is not outside, is it?
      Thanks!

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