Friday, 4 December 2015

the first step... journey begins - Haiku

I am discovering 'The Narrow Road to Deep North' by Matsuo Basho in Carpe Diem Haiku Kai this month.

Basho's journal of the journey interspersed with verses is a great inspiration for writing and a difficult one too.




lost within
the pilgrim steps forward
-peace echoes

goodbye
my good friends
-seagulls wave
Prompt by and Shared with-
Carpe Diem #870 prologue: a door of grass; spring departing; how glorious
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/12/carpe-diem-870-prologue-door-of-grass.html











2 comments:

  1. Your second haiku is very strong ... it paints a heartbreaking kind of farewell. Your second haiku gives new hope ... I sense a strong spiritual layer in that one.

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    1. Thanks for the appreciation and encouragement, Kristjaan

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