The intense pair
questioned
the barren one
Years worth of questions
asked
in a single look
The connection from past
drained
every worry from her being
Three Word Wednesday - "Barren, Intense, Worry"
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ooh sounds like there is more questtions here
ReplyDeleteSo many questions... so few answers...
DeleteThanks for stopping by, Sheilagh...
Most intriguing. At first I thought it might have been parents questioning why there were no grandkids yet, but the last couple of lines made me think maybe there was a lot more to it than that!
ReplyDeleteI reread my own words... and yes, your initial impression can be implied by the beginning of the poem :)
DeleteThanks!
How important it is to put the past behind us, only then can we move forward and be free to start again.
ReplyDeleteThe constant struggle to let go...
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Curiosity generating!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ravish!
DeleteBeautiful. Sometimes, I see the mirror and wonder if the reflection is the more intense, draining me of past worries too. And sometimes, it feels the past helps drain present worries. Thought provoking piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Vinay...
DeleteI am impressed by your perspective of one's own reflection being the mirror to one's past... very interesting!
A meaningful connection is worth it's weight in good for sure
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jae Rose...
DeleteOne person who understands what we really feel, can give us such strength...
Almost mystical, Nimi.
ReplyDeleteThanks... My pleasure that you find it mystical. I congratulate myself on words well written :)
Deleteintense, mysterious , well done
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Thanks Cifar...
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