Sobbing eyes - a Haiku

seeking new admirer
kite glides away teasingly
- sobbing eyes




For this episode of CD Special the goal is to write a haiku inspired by the one below by Michael Dylan Welch -

roar of the midway—
the toddler's balloon
rises in moonlight

© Michael Dylan Welch

And my effort to do the same is at the beginning of this post.




Prompt by and Shared with -
Carpe Diem Special #170 Michael Dylan Welch's 1st roar of the midway
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/10/carpe-diem-special-170-michael-dylan.html













Comments

  1. Chèvrefeuille6 October 2015 at 13:13

    Wonderful very much in tune with the given haiku by Welch.

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    1. Fascinating Quest5 November 2015 at 18:14

      Thanks a lot Kristjaan. You give us prompts that make us try a little extra...

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