Friday, 4 December 2015

Waving goodbye - Haiku

This week's CDHWT episode is about "Mixing it Up".
It means - mixing up the action so the reader does not know if nature is doing the acting or if a human is doing it.

I am always struggling to write according to the rules of these techniques.
Giving it a try here again...


last glance
waving goodbye
grass sways




Credits: Miscanthus (or Susuki)


Prompt by and Shared with-
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #21 The Technique of Mixing it Up
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/12/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-21.html











4 comments:

  1. I really think you "mixed it up" quite nicely...and great photo to go with your haiku :)

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    1. Thanks a lot, Lynn. It feels good to have 'done it' :)

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  2. And ... I only can say "you did it" this is a wonderful example of the "mixing-it-up" technique Nimi.

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    1. I am so happy on reading this, Kristjaan, you won't believe it... Thanks :D

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